For my first draft, I had received feedback back from my teachers and fellow classmates that the magazine looks very basic and it looks like it's straight out of Canva. My magazine is supposed to be high end but this is too basic. This made me realise that my magazine could be improved, which meant that I had to try again, with a different layout on canva. So i decided to make small changes at first for my front cover, kept the contents page relatively the same and the changed the double page spread a lot, to make it look more professional.